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Remember 'Bargain'? The epic that became a series that will… - moonspinner
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Remember 'Bargain'? The epic that became a series that will become the seed of an original novel when [not IF! WHEN!] I get round to working on it.    Well this is a cookie of a pivotal scene in it.  Consider it my apology to my flist for that little display I made a while back. ::blushes::

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'It's as if they have a mind of their own.'
 
'The midi-chlorians? I thought you said they were not living organisms?'
 
'Perhaps I was wrong.'
 
'Perhaps you know nothing and I have wasted Naboo's money on a charlatan.'
 
Anakin heard the conversation as if it were a dream. He was dispassionately afraid, somewhere in the back of his mind, he knew his situation was dire. But he was also oblivious, disconnected somehow from himself. 
 
'We cannot keep him here indefinitely. Already his people are demanding for him.'
 
'Perhaps if you had acquired a less rare specimen...'
 
'You forget your place, Arbor. Would you like to be reminded?'
 
The first thing he saw when he woke was her face. So perfectly beautiful, it was frightening.


Sort of an 'all who look upon me will love me and despair' moment.

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r0ck3tsci3ntist From: r0ck3tsci3ntist Date: February 2nd, 2007 04:51 pm (UTC) (Link)
*bouncing* Ooohh..... *grins*
vanimy From: vanimy Date: February 5th, 2007 02:56 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooooh... You gotta continue with this! This is an order. :P
moonspinner From: moonspinner Date: February 5th, 2007 03:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
::LOL!:: My dear, this is long and dijointed and probably too alien for fan fiction. :p Seriously! It involves a Dark Galadriel-type Padme who would use just about any thing to get power and more power. I don't know if I could write it without getting mugged. PLUS - I think it might be a good original story.

Anyway--- where have you been? Buried in your books? I've missed you. ::sad face::
vanimy From: vanimy Date: February 5th, 2007 06:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
Awwwww... *huggles*

Yep, I've been buried in books and footie... ;) I can't wait for all this to be over. *sighs*

As for the story, well, why not? Padmé going after power and power... Mmh... Don't tempt me. :P
moonspinner From: moonspinner Date: February 6th, 2007 06:13 am (UTC) (Link)
LOL! It does sound awfully familiar, doesn't it? But I promise, it was arrived at quite independently. I started toying with the idea when the 'Dark Padme' topic was being discussed on the WQGL thread at tfn. I will probably keep writing the short story version, like a vignette series, but I don't think I'll write a full-length story of it. I'm saving that for the original story that I plan to write this year.
fialleril From: fialleril Date: February 6th, 2007 11:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hmm, very intriguing. More? *bats eyelashes*
moonspinner From: moonspinner Date: February 7th, 2007 08:02 am (UTC) (Link)
Well this isn't exactly a w-i-p just a random drabble. I've had the idea of this story for a while and I'm torn between writing it as fan fiction or altering enough of the background to make it original fiction... ::fidgets:: I do love the idea of Warrior Queen Amidala though.
fialleril From: fialleril Date: February 7th, 2007 08:04 am (UTC) (Link)
Original fiction. That would be very interesting. :) Worth considering, I think. You would be excellent.
moonspinner From: moonspinner Date: February 7th, 2007 08:09 am (UTC) (Link)
::blushes:: Thank you for the encouragement. That really means a lot to me. :)
fialleril From: fialleril Date: February 7th, 2007 08:12 am (UTC) (Link)
You're very welcome. ;) And I do mean it.
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